2024 Tanka for Sizing Up Manhood

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Tanka for Sizing Up Manhood

Your roar left its mark,

intended, I’m sure. Callous

choice, assaulting peace,

killing transcendent, quiet

talk. Ego zooming beyond

decent boundaries.

What pat on the back were you

starved for as a kid

that propels this screeching need

to announce yourself, to pierce

equanimity

with vulgar speed and racket?

You think you’re hot, blasting down

Reed Market Road, risking all

in your souped-up, sleek chassis.

Do you have a clue

how naked you are? When next

you hit the floorboard, think what’s

grandly broadcast with VAROOM

a child’s display of smallness.

 

Carol Barrett has published three volumes of poetry, most recently READING WIND, and one of creative nonfiction, PANSIES. An NEA Fellow in Poetry, Carol has lived in nine states and in England. She has taught creative writing to students ranging from kindergarten to doctoral studies, and currently supervises creative dissertations at Antioch University and Saybrook University.

Vanessa Aiello is a photographer and writer from Springfield, Massachusetts. Vanessa Aiello was recently named the Intercollegiate Poet of Regis College and published in MassPoetry’s Future in Verse. She was also published in ArtWife and CoolBeansLit for her photography. She recently graduated from Regis College in May of 2024 with a B.A in Secondary Education and English and a minor in Writing. She is currently a special education English teacher. Photography has always been one of her greatest passions.